tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post3251089347420395261..comments2014-12-10T13:15:50.443-08:00Comments on 1:30 Blogging to Discover and Share: Writing Exercise One: Lauren RichardsMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-5748844227957497042014-09-15T10:56:43.776-07:002014-09-15T10:56:43.776-07:00You have very good use of Imagery it almost feel l...You have very good use of Imagery it almost feel like I am really there. Jacob Kellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523772489899449778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-58107210851216771992014-09-15T10:53:26.082-07:002014-09-15T10:53:26.082-07:00I like how it was done in a first person perspecti...I like how it was done in a first person perspective. I was debating to do this, but the way how you use the stanzas and line breaks make it seem really like if you were him. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06015124779045439458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-26592874646332050602014-09-15T10:45:33.308-07:002014-09-15T10:45:33.308-07:00I laughed when I read how you wrote "I still ...I laughed when I read how you wrote "I still wonder what would compel somebody to think that walking across two of the tallest tower was a good idea" because it is so true! What a crazy yet perfectly balanced man. Literally and mentally. I also loved your poem because unlike everyone else, at least what from I observed, yours wasn't about that walk but about the moments leading up to the walk and that in itself is powerful. Nice work. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09800462152654836069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-71347396846349866172014-09-15T10:42:44.102-07:002014-09-15T10:42:44.102-07:00I really like how you decided to put the poem in t...I really like how you decided to put the poem in the perspective of Phillip. I did that as well for my poem and I think that it gives the poem a certain tone and imagery for the reader. Makes it feel as if I am there. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05307473988399698800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-34134196841430067342014-09-15T10:02:35.116-07:002014-09-15T10:02:35.116-07:00I love the line breaks and the fact that it's ...I love the line breaks and the fact that it's before his walk on the wire. The first person is spot on and the quotes were excellent choices!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519027930734775705noreply@blogger.com