tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post4166519991870514349..comments2014-12-10T13:15:50.443-08:00Comments on 1:30 Blogging to Discover and Share: Philippe Petit Poem by Kristen Orewiler Mike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-36791431406573953332014-09-15T14:31:24.247-07:002014-09-15T14:31:24.247-07:00I liked your poem a lot. It tells me exactly what ...I liked your poem a lot. It tells me exactly what happened which is a great thing for someone that has no idea who this man is. I like how you make each stanza its own sentence and then the last stanza had very short sentences. It is a great style and i really like it.Evanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09379626511644597937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-90240595247488043342014-09-15T10:53:51.863-07:002014-09-15T10:53:51.863-07:00I like this because it was like a story. I enjoye...I like this because it was like a story. I enjoyed how you told his events in order and the reactions of the spectators. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12168419687974180965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-32746633566564700912014-09-15T10:45:38.375-07:002014-09-15T10:45:38.375-07:00I really liked how you used so many exact words Pe...I really liked how you used so many exact words Petit said in the video, It made it feel like it was Petit himself was describing this experience he was having. When you said, in the paragraph before the poem, that you wanted to stress what was being said I think you completely accomplished this. It gave a feeling of how Petit felt when he made this incredible journey.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17743515827031019907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-78444641769164420162014-09-15T10:05:14.550-07:002014-09-15T10:05:14.550-07:00I absolutely enjoyed this poem and i can relate on...I absolutely enjoyed this poem and i can relate on the feelings thought process. This peom was very well organized and i could appreciate reading a lot. Good job and i loved the ending the most.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519027930734775705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-39791281607491014462014-09-14T15:01:21.164-07:002014-09-14T15:01:21.164-07:00I loved reading your poem, it was well written. It...I loved reading your poem, it was well written. It told the full story of Philippe Peiti's walk and the emotions he experienced. My favorite part of the poem was in the last stanza, it summed up the poem very well and left you feeling inspired.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132348122491581923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-41841026811001710412014-09-10T12:19:16.765-07:002014-09-10T12:19:16.765-07:00I thought your poem was very well written. I liked...I thought your poem was very well written. I liked how your stanzas were very organized, and I like how you used the last three lines of your poem to tie the whole piece together. Job well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09507717697654087852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8903053628583691322.post-83452629163465467012014-09-10T11:41:28.291-07:002014-09-10T11:41:28.291-07:00I really enjoyed your poem because I actually felt...I really enjoyed your poem because I actually felt like I was living his life through his eyes and his own experiences. Also, I found the structure of your poem intriguing because I haven't seen many poems like that before.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945331339464261086noreply@blogger.com